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Jan Haag's avatar

Thank you! I deeply admire your choice and presentation of poems. Keep up the great work! Many of us appreciate all your time, effort and great heart!

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JEANETTE LEBLANC's avatar

"all we can say now is

mercy, please rock me"

Do you know that often I skip to the final two or three lines of a poem. See if they stand on their own, make meaning without any other context. Find out if they hit me in the gut in that way that is pleasure and pain. Then I go back and read the poem in its entirety, already know what is coming, already having been rocked by the mastery of the end. My favorite poems, they all have final lines like this, lines that say everything to me, so that even if someone erased the remainder of the poem from existence, I somehow feel like I have still known it, been intimate with it.

Also, your opener today, everything before the image. I felt every word so deeply, as if from the center of my own living. God, what a gift to find myself, my life, my ache, my want, all here in your words.

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